I drew this last year for Sephie, and she scanned it for me. I think I did good with this one..I still need to finish CGing the outline that I scanned all that time ago T_T;;
I'm not a fan of anime by any means, but this is pretty good. If you do more work on it like you said you might, I'd recommend working on the lettering that says, 'Platina'. It kind of takes away from the finished look of the piece to have it scrawled in regular handwriting. Some of the bumps on the edges long hair flowing to the right need to be smoothed out, something you could easily do in pencil. The shading isn't as great on the darker body regions near the bottom, but it's really good on the uplifted arm, the face, and the top of the hair.
Overall, I don't want to sound like I'm bashing your piece- nothing of the sort. I wouldn't have commented if it didn't appeal to me in the first place (which is saying something, because I prefer dark art to anything.) This is just my attempt at constructive criticism.
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My head hurts! ;.;
Overall, I don't want to sound like I'm bashing your piece- nothing of the sort. I wouldn't have commented if it didn't appeal to me in the first place (which is saying something, because I prefer dark art to anything.) This is just my attempt at constructive criticism.
i really like all of your angles, your pose, and the way you conveyed motion, or at least what I interpret as such
oh, and 'ello neighbor
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Guns dont kill people, people kill people.
And monkeys, monkeys that have guns can kill people too.
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Everyone wants a place in heaven, but they don't want to believe/do/say anything to get there
The problem isnt God - its us
Love is not something that has to be perfect
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