As I told you after you drew it, VERY GORGEOUS *u*! *nuzzles* and yesss CG it!

Ooooo... Pretty *.*

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My head hurts! ;.;

Very very nice! I agree -- you should CG it! ^.^

One of my old favorites!

Oohh! Platina-sama desu! He's the most beautiful character, ne?

I'm not a fan of anime by any means, but this is pretty good. If you do more work on it like you said you might, I'd recommend working on the lettering that says, 'Platina'. It kind of takes away from the finished look of the piece to have it scrawled in regular handwriting. Some of the bumps on the edges long hair flowing to the right need to be smoothed out, something you could easily do in pencil. The shading isn't as great on the darker body regions near the bottom, but it's really good on the uplifted arm, the face, and the top of the hair.
Overall, I don't want to sound like I'm bashing your piece- nothing of the sort. I wouldn't have commented if it didn't appeal to me in the first place (which is saying something, because I prefer dark art to anything.) This is just my attempt at constructive criticism.

wow, very sharp, very well drawn
i really like all of your angles, your pose, and the way you conveyed motion, or at least what I interpret as such

oh, and 'ello neighbor

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this is very well done! great work!

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